Question

最近我校举办了一次英语书法比赛。大部分同学积极参与,但少数同学书写不好,也不愿改善。请你根据以下提示,给二十一世纪英文报写一篇短文,分析该现象产生的原因并发表自己的看法。

现象：一些学生不善书写,也不愿改善书写

原因：1.可以借助电脑,没有必要练字;

2.功课太忙,没时间练字;

3.练字见效慢,很难练好。

你的看法：……

注意:1.词数120左右；2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。

In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life,

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Answer 1

In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life, we held an English Handwriting Competition. Many students took an active part in the activity. However, some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting. The reasons are as follows:

On one hand, they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer. On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice. Besides, practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can’t make great progress in a short time.

In my view, Students’ beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves. What’s more, good handwriting is always appreciated by people, especially by teachers. Therefore, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。最近我校举办了一次英语书法比赛。大部分同学积极参与,但少数同学书写不好,也不愿改善。请你根据以下提示,给二十一世纪英文报写一篇短文,分析该现象产生的原因并发表自己的看法。现象：一些学生不善书写,也不愿改善书写

原因：1.可以借助电脑,没有必要练字; 2.功课太忙,没时间练字;3.练字见效慢,很难练好。[来需要写的提纲已经给出，需要就此写一篇文章。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意词数120左右。

【亮点说明】However, some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting这里含有一个定语从句；On one hand, they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer.这里含有一个宾语从句。On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice. 这里含有一个宾语从句。

考点：提纲类书面表达