Question

　此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

A warm - heart nurse on her first day’s work came to	76．__________________
a patient. She asked him she could do anything for	77．__________________
him, and he only waved his hands and said something	78．__________________
she could hardly understand. She asked him again	79．__________________
and he just kept saying the different words, but	80．__________________
in a more lower voice, before closing his eyes. She	81．__________________
felt his pulse and found him death. She rushed to	82．__________________
repeat to the doctor sounds she had heard. “My	83．__________________
dear girl,” said the doctor after listen carefully to	84．__________________
what she repeats,“he was saying you’re standing on my oxygen pipe.”	85．__________________

Answer 1

76．warm-heart→warm-hearted. 　

77．him∧→if／whether．

78．and→but.　

79．√

80．different→same.　

81．more→much或去掉more.　

82．death→dead.

83．∧sounds→the.

84．1isten→1istening.　

85．repeats→repeated.　

解析:

76.“形容词＋名词＋ed”构成复合形容词。

77.if／whether意为“是否”，在此引导宾语从句。

78表转折应使用but.

79.正确

80.由keep saying可推知。

81.lower是low的比较级，所以不可再用more.“much＋比较级”意为“…的多”。

82.find him dead意为“发现他死了”。

83.sounds后接定语从句，表特指应带定冠词the.

84.介词after后接动词-ing形式作宾语。时。

85.讲述过去的情况应使用过去