Question

请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood.

注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

除诗歌外，文体不限；

词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

The weather depends on the sky, but whether you are happy or not depends on yourself.

I can well remember that I didn’t pass the Chinese exam several times last year, so the weather of my sky seemed to be full of clouds. Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful, they could not let me escape from depression. What’s more, I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates. My Chinese teacher noticed my subtle difference, so she gave me some advice and told me to change my attitude. With the help of her, I tried to face the trouble with a positive attitude. To my surprise, everything changed. It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese.

Life full of difficulties. Sometimes you may not be able to decide the situation you are in, bur you can change your attitude.

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如depend on，be full of，escape from，What’s more, With the help of sb. , to one’s surprise, make great progress , not … but …；并注意了句子的衔接如：but，Although，so，before等等。

考点：提纲类写作