题目内容
高考临近，许多家长用金钱，旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习，考上一所好大学。假定你是高三学生李华，请根据所提供的有关信息，给某英文报社写封短信。
内容要点：
1、许多家长用金钱，旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习，考上一所好大学；
2、可能会导致学生只关注物质奖励，而减少学习乐趣；
3、一旦获得想要的奖励就失去了学习动力；
4、你的建议。
注意：
1、不要逐词逐句地翻译。
2、为使语句连贯，可以适当增加细节。
3、词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Editor,
With the college entrance examination approaching, …
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
Dear Editor,
With the college entrance examination approaching, many parents try to encourage their children to study hard and be admitted into a famous university. They promise that they will be rewarded with things such as money, traveling and so on once they achieve the goal.
However, I don’t think this is a proper way. Firstly, it may lead to the fact that children’s attention will focus on such things instead of the pleasure of studying; Secondly, they may stop working hard as soon as they get what they want.
I think a wise way is to make us aware of the importance of going to a good university. Besides, we should have much knowledge for our future. What’s your opinion?
Yours truly
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：
题目要求根据所给信息给英文报社写一封信。信的要点包括：家长通过许下承诺来鼓励孩子好好学习考入理想大学；可能导致学生减少学习兴趣；容易失去学习动力；自己的建议。 注意不要逐词逐句翻译，可适当拓展，注意语句的连贯性；词数在100词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数；注意书信的格式，不能出现标点和拼写错误。
亮点说明：
范文注意使用and so on, However, Firstly, Secondly, Besides等连接上下文，使作文条理清晰、语意连贯；
范文使用了with复合结构With the college entrance examination approaching；宾语从句that they will be rewarded with things，a wise way is to make us aware of the importance of going to a good university；同位语从句that children’s attention will focus on such things...；条件状语从句once they achieve the goal；时间状语从句as soon as they get what they want等；语法知识的使用使作文的档次得到了提高；
范文使用了一些固定短语：try to，study hard，be admitted into，such as，lead to，instead of等，丰富了作文的内容。
考点：书信类作文
