Question

假如你是美国的Mike，你的朋友张平打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：
1. 语言能力是基础
2. 适应能力很重要
3. 兴趣爱好被看重
4. 要有社会责任感
注意：词数100左右。
Dear Zhang Ping,
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Yours,
Mike

Answer 1

Dear Zhang Ping,
I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.
As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.
This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.
Yours，
Mike

试题分析：本文是一篇书信，属于提纲类作文。文章给出了简单的中文提示，给学生留下了很大自由发挥的空间，有益于考查考生的能力。成文时要注意：1.文章内容要齐全；（1）语言能力是基础；（2）适应能力很重要；（3）兴趣爱好被看重；（4）要有社会责任感。2.时态：用一般现在时；3.人称：以第一人称为主；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语及高级句式，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章流畅，自然。
【亮点说明】使用从句高级句型：As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed. 使用连词和插入语：As far as I know, Besides, What’s more, Last but not the least,高级词汇：essential，responsibility等。