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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。

I love camping. It’s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation. Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day. We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp, and what I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.

1.把spent改为spend

2.把excited改为exciting

3.把never改为ever

4.把cook改为cooked

5.把wonderfully改为wonderful

6.把or改为and

7.把tree改为 trees

8.把many改为much

9.去掉what

10.加to

【解析】

试题分析：考查短文改错

1.spent改为spend；第二句It’s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation，to后应结动词原形spent是spend的过去形式，故把spent改为spend

2.excited改为exciting；第四句It was one of the most excited experiences ，excited感到兴奋的多用于句型be excited ，exciting令人兴奋的这是最令人兴奋的经历之一，故把excited改为exciting

3.never改为ever；第四句It was one of the most excited experience I had never had.never是从来都没有的意思，ever曾经，据句意为这是我曾有的最让人激动的经历之一，故把never改为ever

4.cook改为cooked；第六句We cook over a fire，全文是过去的事情，应用过去时，故把cook改为cooked

5.wonderfully改为wonderful ；第六句food always tasted wonderfully.，taste为连系动词，猴急形容词，表示尝起来….故把wonderfully改为wonderful

6.I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air我看见了美丽的山呼吸了新鲜的空气，两者应是并列关系不是选择关系，应用and表并且，故把or改为and

7.tree改为 trees；第八句I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree，tree是可数名词，前面无数量词时要用复数，故把tree改为 trees

8.many改为much；第九句It doesn’t cost many to camp，花费钱应用much，故把many改为much

9.and what I believe it’s the best way前面已有and连接两个句子，就不需要what做领导词，故去掉what

10.get close nature and enjoy its beauty.，get close to…亲近…..固定句型，故】加to

考点：考查短文改错

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