Question

某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇90字左右的短文。
注意：1.文中不得出现具体的地名，否则扣分。
2.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.生词：环境 environment; 污染 pollution;方便 convenient

过去	1.生活贫困，房屋破旧。 2.污染严重，垃圾遍地。 3.交通不便，游客很少。

 

现在	1.生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车。 2.环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝…… 3.旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。
将来	请你展望家乡的未来。

The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small.                                                    
                                                    
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                

Answer 1

　The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.
I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

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