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【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mr. Brown,

I’m real glad to receive your letter. As you have seen it, lots of Chinese chose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wish for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upside down” sounds same as the character for “ to arrive” so this means that happy is arriving. Quite interested, isn’t it?

On the way, I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. It’s a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan but we usually eat Zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. It will be a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture and tradition.

Looking forward to receive your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Brown,

I’m glad to receive your letter. As you have seen , lots of Chinese to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their

best for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upside down” sounds same as the character for “ to arrive” so this means that is arriving. Quite , isn’t it? the way, I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Exam. It’s a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan we usually eat Zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. It will be a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture and tradition.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.第一句real---really。 考查副词的用法。修饰形容词的词应该是副词，故把real 改为really。

2.第二句删去it。 考查非限定从的用法。本句话为非限制性定语从句，As做can see的宾语，所以要去掉多余的it。

3.第二句chose---choose。 考查一般现在时态。本段叙述的是事实，都应该用一般现在时态，chose是过去式，故把chose改为choose。

4.第三句wish—wishes。 考查名词的复数。表示祝愿的名词应该用复数，故把wish改为wishes。

5.第四句在same 之前加the。 考查冠词的用法。same之前应该用the，故在same之前添加the。

6.第四句happy---happiness。 考查名词的用法。形容词不能做主语，应该用名词作主语，故把happy改为happiness。

7.第五句interested---interesting。 考查形容词的用法。interested是形容人的形容词，interesting用来形容物或者事，故把interested改为interesting。

8.第六句On --- By。考查介词的用法。On the way 是在路上 by the way是顺便说一下，根据语境应该是顺便说一下。故把On 改为By。

9.第七句but—and。考查连词的用法。那是纪念屈原的日子和吃粽子是并列关系，故把but改为and。

10.第九句receive---receiving。考查动名词的用法。英语中介词之后应该用动名词作宾语，故把receive改为receiving。

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