Question

假设你是李华，因家庭贫困，就读高中以来一直受到美国友人Carter先生的热心资助。新年来临之际，请给远在美国的Carter先生写一封信，信中包括：
1．问候Carter先生并表达感激之情；
2．介绍自己高三以来的学习生活情况以及新年的打算；
3．祝福Carter先生，希望他能来中国。
注意：
1．词数120~150；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Mr. Carter,
How I miss you and your family! Stepping into the New Year , I’m writing to          
                                                                        
                                                                             
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

Answer 1

Mr. Carter,
How I miss you and your family! Stepping into the New Year, I’m writing to express my thanks and share with you my school life and my New Year resolution.
But for your generous help, I couldn’t enjoy a wonderful school life now. I’m on good terms with the teachers and my fellow classmates here. Also, I am getting along well with my study. Actually, I’m making progress. Ever since Senior Three, I’ve been working harder. My goal is to major in physics, which I’m always fascinated with , so I will spare no effort to be admitted into my dream university in the New Year. I want to pass your kindness on by devoting myself to the world of science.
Words seem to fail me every time I try to express my thanks to you , and I’ll keep my promise and not let you down. Please be my guest anytime at your convenience. Wish you and your family good health and lots of happiness in the New Year!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

本文是一封书信。要点的转化并不是很清楚，学生们需要自己提炼出部分观点加以补充。在转化的过程中应该注意要使用地道的英语，同时尽量使用较高级的词汇，句型再辅以适当的连接词让整个文章更有档次，另外还有注意应用文的格式。