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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line that is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.

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【解析】第一处：固定搭配so...that...如此……以至于……。故very改成so。

第二处：这里表示的是一个经常性、普遍的动作，所以不能用过去分词regarded，应用一般现在时regard。故regarded改成regard。

第三处：there be句型。故has改成is。

第四处：这一句是因果关系，在英语中因为和所以只用其一，故把so删去。

第五处：这里表示前文所说的Internet，此处是一个代词。代指前文内容用it，故This改成It。

第六处：这里的前后两部分是转折关系。moreover是此外、而且的意思，however、but有但是的意思，但这里和下一句中间有“,”分开，故Moreover改成However。

第七处：这里动词spend做主语，动词做主语时，动词要变为动名词的形态。故spend改为spending。

第八处：固定搭配do harm to/be harm for对……有害。故for改成to

第九处：这里是用一个副词修饰use，proper本身就是副词，故properly改成proper。