题目内容

你打算毕业后去美国留学,想咨询你的美国朋友Chris, 请你根据以下提示写一封信。
目的:增长见识,体验文化;
困惑:语言障碍,学业压力;
征求建议。
注意:1. 词数不少于50
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours
Joe

Dear Chris,
I’ve finally made my decision to go to American for further study after high school.
I’ve been longing to go to American, mainly for two reasons. One is that I can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English. I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure from college course.
I hope you can offer me some practical advice.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours
Joe

试题分析:本文是书信类作文,要求写信咨询你的美国朋友Chris关于美国留学的事情,文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,但不是很具体,考生要把要点解释清楚,不能有遗漏,还要拓展内容,要充实,在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,应用了一些较好的词组和句子: make one’s decision to do决定做…,long to渴望, have trouble doing做…有困难,suffer from遭受, Look forward to 盼望,One is that I can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country. 这句话用了表语从句,还有范文使用了Besides这样的词使文章更加连贯。
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阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
An increasing number of students fall in love at an early age and create problems with their studies, which has aroused the school’s attention. A middle school has set a "distance for civilized communication" between boy and girl students. Boys and girls should keep a distance of at least 50 centimeters when they talk in public, otherwise they will be criticized or get an even severer punishment, says an article in Beijing News.
It seems that the school has passed the school regulation to prevent girls and boys from falling in love at an early age and creating problems for the school authorities. Some teachers and parents approve of the regulation because it is of vital importance to the teenagers’ study. However, many experts say the problem, if it is one, can be better solved through communication.
It is natural for a teenager to have a feeling of love on someone from the opposite sex. It is natural for girls and boys to be attracted to each other as they mature sexually.
In fact, normal communication between boy and girl students is good not only for their emotional development and personality refinement, but also for their relationship when they grow up.
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词描述“文明交往距离规定”的利弊,并谈谈你对异性交往的看法。
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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