在你的人生成长道路上有很多帮助过你的人.请用英语写一篇短文描写其中一位给你帮助最大的人.并说说你将如何回报他/她.要求:词数120左右. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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在你的人生成长道路上有很多帮助过你的人。请用英语写一篇短文描写其中一位给你帮助最大的人，并说说你将如何回报他/她。

要求：词数120左右。

【答案】

On the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I’m in trouble. Among them, the most important one is my grandma.

In my early years, my parents left home because of their work. So I lived with my grandma until eleven years old. During those days, it was my grandma who looked after me. She also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life. She is a Chinese teacher, so owing to her help my writing skill is better than most students in my class. I really feel proud of my grandma

It is my grandma who gave me a happy and rich childhood. So when I grow to an adult, I will live up to her expectations, which I think is the best thing I can do to please her. Besides, I will certainly set aside as much time as possible to keep her company so that she will not feel lonely. I wish my grandma will live a happy? old-age life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。在你的人生成长道路上有很多帮助过你的人。请用英语写一篇短文描写其中一位给你帮助最大的人，并说说你将如何回报他/她。需要写的话题已经给出，需要我们就这一话题写文章。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】On the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I’m in trouble.这里含有一个定语从句。During those days, it was my grandma who looked after me.这里含有一个强调句。She also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life.这里含有一个定语从句。

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