Question

【题目】假如你是Sandy Smith，你的笔友Li Hua给你写了一封信，内容如下：

Dear Sandy,

I’m writing this letter to ask for help. I will visit England soon, but I know little about the culture of England. Please give me a hand.

I’m looking forward to hearing from your reply soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

请给Li Hua回一封信，要点如下：

1．交通和气候注意事项（适应靠左行走或驾驶的交通规则，出门带伞）；

2．公共场合的注意事项（保持安静等）；

3．和英国人交往的注意事项(尊重隐私等)。

注意：

1．词数：80左右，信的格式、开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；

2．可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Hua,

It is a great chance to visit England. _______________________________________

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Have a good time.

Yours sincerely,

Sandy Smith

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Li Hua,

It is a great chance to visit England. And I’m sure that it will be of some use if you can take the following points into account.

Firstly, you should adapt yourself to the basic rules of British traffic, such as driving and walking on the left. Besides, you’d better bring an umbrella when going out as the weather there is changeable. Secondly, please keep quiet even in public places like supermarkets because noise is offensive there. Last but not least, it is impolite to ask questions about one’s privacy, which will easily cause misunderstanding.

Have a good time.

Yours sincerely,

Sandy Smith

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容是根据要点，给Li Hua回一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意书信格式。

【亮点说明】本文用Firstly, Besides, Secondly, last but not least使文章层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构，如宾语从句And I’m sure that it will be of some use if you can take the following points into account.定语从句it is impolite to ask questions about one’s privacy, which will easily cause misunderstanding.等。