Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

An old proverb says, "Overcome evil by doing good." I read the news and see people who behead（将……斩首）others in the Middle East, abuse maids and domestic workers in Hong Kong, steal money and misuse power in government (not only in China but in the U.S. and every other part of the world), those who claim certain social ideals while privately practicing greed and living lifestyles that totally contradict their so-called 'ideals.' I only see the headlines and rarely read the stories. It is too depressing.

So, what do you do when there is so much evil in the world? What can YOU do about it?

There's only one thing that I know to do. I know (and feel it deep in my heart) to do good.

My way of overcoming evil in the world is too invest in the lives of Chinese children. I do this every day. I love 'giving back'. I love taking the money I earn and investing back into the lives of children. I will create a language learning lab in a public high school's international department (I already bought four new computers for it this week). The students need the tools to work on their English exams and prepare for TOEFL, IELTS and the SAT. There's no provision for them to have such a resource right now, so, rather than complain about it not being done, I decided, 'why don't I do something about it.' I know that I can and just decided to do it. It isn't anything great, but it will make a difference in the lives of some.

（写作内容）

1、请以约30个词概括上文的内容；

2、请以约120个词就“人需要行善”进行议论，内容包括：

（1）你是否赞成行善？人为什么需要行善？ （2）谈谈你今后打算如何行善；

（写作要求）

1、作文中可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文句子。

2、作文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。

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Answer 1

【答案】The author not only emphasizes that one should overcome evil by doing good by listing some evil things in society, but also tells us the good things that he has done and will do in the future.

From my perspective, I firmly stand up for doing good. On one hand, doing good can help people acquiring (accumulate) merit which will make one end up being a man of good morality. On the other hand, doing good can have a great power which can give others warmth, help them out when they are in trouble, which eventually shape our own great career. Furthermore, doing good is just like a seed that can sow good and harvest hope, giving others hope, confidence and courage of life.

As for my future intention of doing good, firstly, I will strive to make money to assist those who are in need of help, such as building homes for orphans and for the lonely elderly and donating money to Hope Project. Secondly, I would like to be a volunteer, doing voluntary work helping the poor areas and people.

In conclusion, as long as we each contribute a bit of love to others, our world will become a beautiful harmonious place.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于议论文，表达自己对于行善的观点以及自己对行善有什么打算。

第一步:审题

体裁:议论文

时态:根据提示，应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构:总分总法

总分总法是把主句作为总说，分句分说自己的观点，以这种结构安排所写的内容。

要求:1、请以约30个词概括上文的内容；

2、请以约120个词就“人需要行善”进行议论，内容包括：

（1）你是否赞成行善？人为什么需要行善？ （2）谈谈你今后打算如何行善；

第二步:列提纲

not only...but also...不仅而且

From my perspective以我的观点

stand up for支持

On one hand...On the other hand一方面另一方面

end up doing...结束做...

strive to do尽力做

such as 例如

in conclusion总而言之

第三步:连词成句

1.The author not only emphasizes that one should overcome evil by doing good by listing some evil things in society, but also tells us the good things that he has done and will do in the future.

2.On one hand, doing good can help people acquiring (accumulate) merit which will make one end up being a man of good morality.

3.On the other hand, doing good can have a great power which can give others warmth, help them out when they are in trouble, which eventually shape our own great career.

4.I will strive to make money to assist those who are in need of help, such as building homes for orphans and for the lonely elderly and donating money to Hope Project.

5.In conclusion, as long as we each contribute a bit of love to others, our world will become a beautiful harmonious place.

将关键的词语和短语连成句子，注意主谓一致和时态的问题

第四步:连句成篇

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步:润色修改