Question

假设你是李华，在美国学习期间寄住在Mr. White家里，现在刚回到国内。回国后你发现自己的一本笔记本遗忘在他家，因此给他写一封信，请他帮助寄回笔记本。信的主要内容如下：

* 感谢Mr. White在美国对自己的帮助。

* 忘带回一本笔记本。

* 笔记本里记录有上课的听课内容，非常珍贵。

* 自己支付邮资。

注意：l. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：邮资：postage

Dear Mr. Brown,

I’m now safely back home.

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Brown

I’m now safely back home. Thanks you very much for all the kindness I got from you during my stay. Hope everything is fine with you there.

Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. When I came back, I suddenly realized that I had left my noter-book behind at your place. It is very precious because I kept a lot of lecture notes in it . would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? I’ll pay for the postage. The note-book must be on the book shelf in my bedroom. It is the one with a red cover.

Thanks and all the best

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达中心话题是写信，此话题贴近生活，学生们有话可说，但是在写作时一定要注意审题，不要跑题，要按要点提示去完成写作任务。此外，在句型句式上要尽量有所变化，可以使用非谓语，倒装句等，不要使句式过于单一。在语言表达上要适当使用插入语，连接词等以使上下文语义连贯流畅，同时也使文章有层次感，有条理性

【亮点说明】范文中提到一些常见的短语如ask sb a favor向某人求助；leave sth +地点，把某物忘记在某处；pay for 支付；It is very precious because I kept a lot of lecture notes in it这个句子中because连接两个句子；The note-book must be on the book shelf in my bedroom.这个句子中must 表示肯定猜测；It is the one with a red cover.这个句子the one表示特指。

考点： 提纲类作文