Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear sir/ Madam,

As a Chinese high school student to graduate in this year, I sincerely apply to a chance to study in your university. I’m eighteen but will finish my three years of study in high school soon. I studied Chinese, English, math, physics, chemistry, biology, geography, history and other subject, of which science subjects are my favorites. I I’m also good at English. I can communicate fluent with native speakers in English.

Beside, I go in for various out-of-class activities. I like play football, table tennis, and so on. I’m also member of many clubs for music and opera. I’m a volunteer in my neighborhood.

I’m looking forward to hear from you. And please contact me by e-mail: lihua@qq.com.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1.删去this前的in

2. apply后的to改成for

3. but 改成 and

4. studied 改成 study

5. subject 改成 subjects

6. fluent 改成 fluently

7. Beside 改成 Besides

8. play 改成 playing

9. member a

10. hear hearing

【解析】本文是作者想要去读大学的一封申请信。

考查固定用法。“今年毕业”直接说graduate this year，所以删去this前的in。

考查固定用法。我真诚地申请去你们大学学习的机会。apply for申请，是固定用法，所以apply后的to改成for。

考查连词。我今年18岁并且很快就要完成我三年的高中学习。表示并列关系，所以but 改成 and。

考查时态。表示主语现在的状态，用一般现在时，所以studied 改成 study。

考查名词单复数。有other修饰，所以用名词复数，subject 改成 subjects。

考查副词。修饰动词communicate用副词，fluent 改成 fluently。

考查副词。此外，我参加了各种各样的课外活动。Beside 改成 Besides。

考查固定用法。Like doing喜欢做某事，是固定用法。play 改成 playing。

考查固定用法。a member of……中的一员，是固定用法。Member前加 a。

考查固定用法。look forward to后面接动词ing形式，所以hear改成 hearing。