Question

下图中欧阳的妈妈正在与老师交谈，请根据图画所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，发表自己的感想。

Answer 1

One day, OuYang’s mum was talking with his teacher. When the teacher asked OuYang’s mum what shortcomings he had, the mother talked a lot. While being asked about her son’s advantages, she kept silent, not knowing what to say.
The picture reflects a real problem in our daily family life. The parents try to satisfy their children physically, arranging everything for their children. As a result, they expect their children should get good marks in return. They think the children must follow their advice, no matter whether it is suitable to their children. However, when children don’t obey their will or can’t live up to their expectations, they will complain a lot. In a word, too much and little communication make the love selfish.
In my opinion, parents should communicate with their children as much as possible. Only in this way can children and parents understand each other. I believe mutual understanding and toleration can make them both happy.

试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，按照题目要求要先介绍图画内容，然后发表自己的感想，做题时首先认真读图，读懂图画所要表达的含义，而不是介绍图画表面的内容，这要求学生有一定的归纳能力，第二部介绍自己对这种现象的感想，在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
【亮点说明】所给范文条理清晰，语言简洁，应用了一些较好的短语和句子：arranging everything for 为…安排一切，As a result因此, live up to 达到…的标准，in return做为回报， in a word总之，一句话, as much as possible尽可能多的. When the teacher asked OuYang’s mum what shortcomings he had, the mother talked a lot. 这句话使用了宾语从句，While being asked about her son’s advantages, she kept silent, not knowing what to say.这句话使用了非谓语动词， They think the children must follow their advice, no matter whether it is suitable to their children.这句话使用了让步状语从句， Only in this way can children and parents understand each other. 这句话使用了倒装句。