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内容:劳动节即将来临,我们将放三天假。有人打算去旅游,有人准备待在家里。请为你自己制定一份节日计划,并谈谈你的理由。
要求:1. 有明确的计划和相应的理由
2. 字数:100左右。
3. 开头句已写好,不计入字数。

Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off.
 


Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off. It’s great. Personally, I think it will be a wonderful holiday. Recently, we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam, which has really got us tired out. So I’d like to have a good rest at home, reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep. Also, during the holiday, the weather must be fine, neither too hot nor too cold. It’s the right season for an outing. I can’t wait to enjoy the beauty of nature with my family or friends. Of course, as a senior middle school student, there’s no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study. I decide to make use of the last day of the holiday to think about my new study plan and do my homework.

解析试题分析:这篇作文是半开放式作文,因为通过题目要求,只知道为你自己制定一份节日计划,并谈谈你的理由。所以应该分两个内容,计划和理由,而且具体的内容要考生结合自己的实际情况去表达,重点是尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点是短语和句式多变:have…. Off放几天假,neither … nor…既不,也不, can’t wait to迫不及待的, attach great importance to重视, make use of 利用,Recently, we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam, which has really got us tired out. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句,So I’d like to have a good rest at home, reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep. 这句话用了现在分词做状语, Of course, as a senior middle school student, there’s no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study. 这句话用了固定句型。
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As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.
The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.
One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.
[写作内容]
以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写,内容包括:
自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况;
“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因;
给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。
[写作要求]
作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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