Question

内容：劳动节即将来临，我们将放三天假。有人打算去旅游，有人准备待在家里。请为你自己制定一份节日计划，并谈谈你的理由。
要求：1. 有明确的计划和相应的理由
2. 字数：100左右。
3. 开头句已写好，不计入字数。

Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off.

Answer 1

Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off. It’s great. Personally, I think it will be a wonderful holiday. Recently, we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam, which has really got us tired out. So I’d like to have a good rest at home, reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep. Also, during the holiday, the weather must be fine, neither too hot nor too cold. It’s the right season for an outing. I can’t wait to enjoy the beauty of nature with my family or friends. Of course, as a senior middle school student, there’s no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study. I decide to make use of the last day of the holiday to think about my new study plan and do my homework.

试题分析：这篇作文是半开放式作文，因为通过题目要求，只知道为你自己制定一份节日计划，并谈谈你的理由。所以应该分两个内容，计划和理由，而且具体的内容要考生结合自己的实际情况去表达，重点是尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点是短语和句式多变：have…. Off放几天假，neither … nor…既不，也不， can’t wait to迫不及待的， attach great importance to重视， make use of 利用，Recently, we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam, which has really got us tired out. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，So I’d like to have a good rest at home, reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep. 这句话用了现在分词做状语， Of course, as a senior middle school student, there’s no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study. 这句话用了固定句型。