Question

书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，因陪母亲看病，不能参加明天下午关于美国文化的讲座。请写一封短信向老师Miss Clinton请假。

内容主要包括：

1、不能听讲座，跟老师表示歉意；

2、向老师陈述缺席理由；

3、询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座。

注意：

1、词数100～120左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、开头语已为你写好。

Dear Miss Clinton,

I am very sorry that

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Miss Clinton,

I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.

My mother is ill, and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. I will take care of my mother until she is better, so I have to ask for several days’ leave. I am very interested in the topic of American culture. It is really a pity that I miss it. I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient.

Thank you very much.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封短信，信的开头结尾已经给出，所以只注意组织好篇章结构和要点的表述即可。其中要点包括1、不能听讲座，跟老师表示歉意；2、向老师陈述缺席理由；3、询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，语言风格符合书信类的文体要求，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: be able to能够；take her to hospital带她去医院；take care of照顾；am very interested in对……非常感兴趣等。还使用了非限制性定语从句I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.并列句My mother is ill, and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. 和条件状语从句If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。

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