Question

某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；

2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；

3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。

注意：

1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly. Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite.
Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class. They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better. If we find those materials interesting, we'll focus our attention on them for long. However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence.

My classmates always call me "Mr. forgetful", because I cannot memorize those I have learnt. I know that it is because I don't spend some time in memorizing them after class. My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求结合自身学习实际，就学习习惯问题为专栏写一篇稿件。内容包括1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；2介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；

3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。分析作文要求可知文章应使用第一人称，用一般现在时。根据要点提示可以在谋篇布局时考虑使用三段式，分三段分别介绍三个要点，根据需要可以调整要点顺序。为了提高作文档次，在写作时要注意尽量使用高级词汇和高级句式，避免句子的单一。可以使用定语从句，状语从句，强调句等等。此外还要注意内容的连贯和上下文的过渡和衔接。

【亮点说明】本篇范文使用了经典的三段式，结构清晰，要点全面，时态，人称正确，很好的完成了写作任务。作者在文中使用了大量的短语，比如In reality,lead to， concentrate on，focus one’s attention on , spend time in doing sth , advise sb to do sth 等，显示了作者词汇的丰富。而且定语从句which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly.并列句hile bad ones bring the opposite.，宾语从句Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class.状语从句 If we find those materials interesting,等复合句的出现也给文章增添了亮点，提高了档次。

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