Question

13．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车"mobike"很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍．请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1．共享单车的使用方法（如：下载APP查看车辆、扫二维码开锁等）；
2．共享单车的优势；
3．你对共享单车的看法．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：共享单车sharing bike    扫二维码 scan the QR code．
Dear Jim，
I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter．
It's very convenient to use if you have a mobile phone．What you do is to find anearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．
Compared toother forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trendas a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressureand does good to the environment as well．
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．
要做的是通过APP找到最近MOBIKE、扫描QR码在自行车上，享受您的旅行．
高分句型二：
It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．
它正成为一种新的趋势，作为一种交通工具，从而缓解交通压力，有利于环境

解答 Dear Jim，
I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter．
It's very convenient to use if you have a mobile phone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip（高分句型一）．
Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well（高分句型二）．
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．