Question

3．假如你叫李华，是一位中学生．学了Healthy Eating后，3…..反映你对当今学生饮食的看法：
1．越来越多的学生喜欢吃西式快餐，结果摄入大量的糖和脂肪；
2．对中餐和西式快餐哪种更健康有不同看法；
3．你认为中式更健康，说出你的理由．
注意：词数为100左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于健康饮食的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态叙述．内容主要包括：一学生的饮食现状；二对中餐和西式快餐哪种更健康有不同看法；三自己的看法以及理由．
高分句型：
1．Now，more and more students are getting fond of western fast food，and thus they take in too much sugar and fat．句子里 thus 表示"因此"，相当于thererfor．be fond of表示"喜欢"．
现在越来越多的学生喜欢吃西式快餐，结果摄入大量的糖和脂肪．
2．But as people are busier and busier with their work，more and more people choose to eat the western fast food because it is convinient to get it，though they may  think that the Chinese food is healthier．句子里as引导时间状语从句，表示"随着"； it is convinient to 表示"做某事便利"；though引导让步状语从句，表示"尽管"．
但是随着人们越来越忙于工作，由于西方快餐的便利性，越来越多的人选择西方快餐，尽管知道中餐更健康．

解答 Now，more and more students are getting fond of western fast food，and thus they take in too much sugar and fat．【高分句型一】I don't think it good for their health．（学生的饮食现状）
      There are all kinds of foods in the world．Which one is healthier，the Chinese food or the western fast food？Different people have different choices．But as people are busier and busier with their work，more and more people choose to eat the western fast food because it is convinient to get it，though they may  think that the Chinese food is healthier．【高分句型二】（对中餐和西式快餐哪种更健康有不同看法）
      In my opinion，the Chinese food is healthier．Firstly，the Chinese food contains a lot of fruit and green vegetables．It is rich in fiber and low in sugar and fat．Secondly，the Chinese food is very delicious and has many dishes．It is nice to taste．I think it is the healthiest in the world．So many Chinese people can keep fit and have white teeth．（自己的看法以及理由）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．