Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, we found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class. I decided to make best of it. I work hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were not helpful. Soon , I became one of the top student in my class, which greatly increased my confident and got me motivated.

My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.

Answer 1

Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an （an）

ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the （Disappointed）

poorly-equipped classroom, we found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, （ I）

I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class. I decided to make^ best of it. I work hard

in the worked

and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were not helpful. Soon , I became one of the top student in my class, which greatly （students）

去掉not increased my confident and got me motivated. （confidence）

My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.（that）

1.a改成an。

2.disappointing改成disappointed

3.we改成I

4.on改成in

5.make和best之间加the

6.work改成worked

7.student改成students

8.去掉not

9.confident改成confidence

10.which改成that

【解析】

1.句意：三年前,我在一场重要的考试中失利，,成为了一名普通学校的学生。important开头是元音，因此冠词应该用an。

2.句意：令我失望的是简陋的校园和研习教室。feel disappointed过去分词做形容词表状态，感到失望。

3.句意：我发现老师非常的耐心和体贴。一句话中的主语前后应统一，故此处也应为I。

4.句意：此外,我很享受课堂上友好的气氛。在课堂上，因此介词改为in。

5.句意：我决定充分利用这一点。固定短语make the best of，故应加the。

6.句意：我努力学校并且和老师同学都相处得非常好。结合上下文时态，此处应改为过去时。

7.句意：不论何时我遇到困难，他们都会来帮助我。根据下文I became one of the top student in my class可知，老师同学们对我帮助很大，故去掉not。

8.句意：很快我就成为了班上的尖子生。one of后应接名词复数，故改为stutents。

9.句意：这极大地提升了我的自信并且让我更积极。my后面应接名词形式,故改为confidence。

10.句意：我的经验告诉我,决定你是谁的不是你得到什么，而是你怎样利用它。定语从句it is not…but…中，how you make use of it为主语，用先行词it代替，只能用that引导。

考点：考查记叙文阅读。