Question

请按下列提示，以“如何交友”为题，用英语写一篇短文。（100词左右）

1）人人都需要朋友，如何交友非常重要；

2）交朋友首先要对别人友善；

3）要使陌生人感到亲切，不管他在何处，关心别人胜过关心自己；

4）与别人有分歧，不争吵，要商量；不要相信那些在危急时刻背离你的人，因为“患难见真情”。

注意：不要逐句翻译，可以适当加上细节，如交友的具体做法，使文章通顺连贯。

参考词汇：

be friendly to 对……友善 disagree with与……有分歧

A friend in need is a friend indeed患难见真情

Answer 1

How to make friends

Everyone needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody.

To make friends, you must be first friendly to others. And often a smile can do it, for the smile is attractive. Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. Besides, care more about others than about yourself. What’s more, even if you disagree with your others, you should have a good talk with them about it rather than quarrel with them. In addition, try to remember others’ names, which will make them feel that they have made a deep impression on you.

Finally, as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed, so don’t believe those who leave you when you are in need.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给提示，以“如何交友”为题，用英语写一篇短文。写作要点包括：如何交友的重要性；首先要对人友善；关心别人胜过自己；产生分歧时要商量等四个方面。词数在100词左右，注意使用参考词汇；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了主语从句、表语从句、定语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：主语从句how to make true friends；不定式表目的to make friends；让步状语从句even if you disagree with your others；表语从句that they have made a deep impression on you；非限制性定语从句①which will make them feel that they have made a deep impression on you，②as a saying goes；定语从句who leave you when you are in need等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用and, besides, what’s more, in addition, finally等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了be friendly to, smile at, be sure to do, in return, care about, rather than, quarrel with, try to do等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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