Question

 

Dear friends,

It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club．As we have been members for a short period of time, we have made a great progress．That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful．Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested．I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far．I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!

 

Answer 1

第一行：real改为really ；　 weekend改为weekends　

第二行：As改为Though / Although / While　 ； a great progress 前面的a去掉

第三行：much去掉　 ；　 and改为but

第四行：his改为their　 ；　 interested改为interesting　

第五行：greatly前加have　 ； see改为seeing

 

第一行：修饰动词：be（is）应该使用副词：really；前面受：several修饰，另外weekend属于可数名词，所以应该用复数：weekends。

第二行：句子：As we have been members for a short period of time, we have made a great progress．中前后属于让步关系，所以把as改为though / although / while，还因为：as表示：虽然时候需要倒装；progress属于不可数名词，所以前面不能出现不定冠词：a

第三行：修饰形容词：active只需用程度副词：very，所以much多余，应该去掉；属于not only、、、but also、、、的固定结构，所以把：and改为but

第四行：此处代指：the foreign teachers应该使用复数：their；修饰：the activities使用：interesting表示：令人感兴趣；

第五行：分析句子结构可知应该使用完成时态：have greatly improved our spoken English ；短语动词：look forward to中to属于介词，后需要接：doing结构，所以把see改为seeing。