Question

假设你是新华中学的高三学生李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的城市举办，你们学校招募志愿者。请根据以下要点给校长写一封自荐信。
爱好体育；2 英语好，擅长交际；3，乐于助人。
注意：1. 词数120左右；
信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Headmaster,
I am more than excited to hear that the Asian Winter Games will be held in our city.__________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I am more than excited to hear that the Asian winter Games will be held in our city. And I strongly hope to be accepted as a volunteer for the games.
I am a student of Senior Three. I am fond of sports, and most of my spare time is spent on the playground with my friends. Of all my subjects at school, English is y favourite one , so I’m sure I can be of some help to foreign players during the games. And I can communicate with them after the game, for example , introducing our city to them. I’m outgoing and I am always ready to help others.
Hope the games to be a great success.
Hope I will be chosen to be one of the volunteers.
Yours
Li Hua

试题分析：考查半开放性作文，本文只是给出了一个大致的内容要点，要求考生自己添加，要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。