Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你校将于下周六举行“我的拿手菜（My Special Recipe）”大赛，并举办健康饮食讲座。你的留学生朋友Jackson对中国饮食很感兴趣，请你用英语写一封email邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括以下要点：

1. 活动时间和地点；

2. 活动的内容和意义。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jackson,

Our school will hold a cooking competition next Saturday, which is titled “My Special Recipe”. I know you’re interested in Chinese food, so I’d like to invite you to attend it.

The competition is intended to highlight the students’ practical cooking skills, assist students in getting into healthy eating habits and enrich their school life as well. It is bound to be a spectacular scene, where you can taste a variety of different dishes and foods. In addition, a lecture on healthy diets will also be delivered, from which you can learn how to develop a healthy eating habit.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；，邀请对中国饮食感兴趣的留学生朋友Jackson参加学校举办的举行“我的拿手菜（My Special Recipe）”大赛。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如： a cooking competition，Chinese food，practical cooking skills，healthy diets等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Our school will hold a cooking competition next Saturday, which is titled “My Special Recipe”，It is bound to be a spectacular scene, where you can taste a variety of different dishes and foods.， a lecture on healthy diets will also be delivered, from which you can learn how to develop a healthy eating habit.。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。