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20．假如你是荣光中学的学生李华，你偶然看到在你市求学的美国学生Tom在网上发帖，要大家给他推荐一本学习汉语的书．你手头正好有一本合适的书可以借给他．请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：1．说明写信原因；2．描述书的情况；3．约定见面时间和地点．注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
    I'm Li Hua，a student of Rongguang Middle School．Dear Tom，
I'm Li Hua，a student of Rongguang Middle School．I learned quite by chance that you needed a book to improve your Chinese．I happen to have one，which I think might help you．（高分句型一）（说明原因）
The book，entitled New Practical Chinese，is intended for beginners at your level．Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life，but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs．（高分句型二）Edited by three language experts，it is widely used by many foreign learners．（书籍描述）
If it is convenient to you，let's meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3 p．m．this Sunday．If not，try to find another time that is suitable for both of us．
Yours，
Li Hua
                                                               
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I happen to have one，which I think might help you．恰好我有一本这个书，我想对你可能有会帮助的．
高分句型二：
Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life，but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs．
它不仅包含我们日常生活中的基本对话，而且它也是你了解中国文化和习俗的一扇窗．
句型一  which I think might help you 该句是一个由which充当关系代词的非限制性定语从句，which在句中替代前面的先行词one，而one指代的是上文中的book
句型二 Not only does it include the basic…but it is also a window…not only…but also..是用来连接并列成分的，当其连接并列分句时，not only后的句中要使用部分倒装，将主语同谓语部分助动词进行位置的交换：does it include the basic此处即为倒装部分

解答 Dear Tom，
    I'm Li Hua，a student of Rongguang Middle School．I learned quite by chance that you needed a book to improve your Chinese．I happen to have one，which I think might help you．（高分句型一）（说明原因）
    The book，entitled New Practical Chinese，is intended for beginners at your level．Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life，but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs．（高分句型二）Edited by three language experts，it is widely used by many foreign learners．（书籍描述）
    If it is convenient to you，let's meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3 p．m．this Sunday．If not，try to find another time that is suitable for both of us．
    Yours，
Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为一封电子邮件，其表述过程中应注意用简洁明了的话将所列举的要求表述清楚是最为重要的，在围绕主题的前提下，适当发散思维，可使文章更为表达明确．