Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike学习会计专业并即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见。请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件。

(1)建议他可以来中国；

(2)阐述你的理由（就业机会多，专业受欢迎，不同的文化体验等）；

(3)承诺可以提供帮助。

注意：

（1）词数100字左右；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：会计学 Accounting

Dear Li Ming,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week. With regard to the question you mentioned , I am firmly convinced that you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies in Accounting.

For one reason, China’s development over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities for the young. What’s more, what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays. In fact, many big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you.

For another reason, China is a country with so different cultures and traditions from the west that many foreigners enjoy living and working here. Why not come and join them? I’m sure you will adapt to the environment quickly. If you come here, I will do what I can to help you. So what are you waiting for?

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文，要求用英文给英国笔友Mike写一封邮件，回复他询问到中国工作的意见。内容包括：(1)建议他可以来中国；(2)阐述你的理由（就业机会多，专业受欢迎，不同的文化体验等）；(3)承诺可以提供帮助。写作时注意条理清楚，态度诚恳，要点全面。准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be glad to，With regard to；For one reason；In fact；For another reason；look forward to等；还运用句型With regard to the question you mentioned , I am firmly convinced that you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies in Accounting.这句话运用了宾语从句；What’s more, what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays.这句话运用了主语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如What’s more，If，So等等。