Question

【题目】假如你是李华，是某报英语专栏“Heart-to-Heart”的一名编辑。近期，你收到来自高中生Sarah的求助信如下。请根据来信内容，给Sarah写一封回信。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Li Hua,

As a freshman in high school,I badly need your help with my sleep problem.The school rule goes that for every dormitory（宿舍）,students are only allowed（被允许）to keep the lights on before 10:40 p.m.So we should all go to bed after 10:40.However,one of my roommates（室友）often washes her clothes as late as 11:00 p.m.,and some others even turn on their flashlights（手电筒）to do homework.The noise and the light really make it hard for me to fall asleep（入睡）,I want to tell them to stop it,but I worry it will harm our relationships.What should I do?

Yours,

Sarah

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sarah,

I'm sorry to hear about your trouble,and I deeply understand how upset one can be with his sleep disturbed.I hope the following can help you out.

It is clear that the problem lies with your roommates,who go against the school rule and influence others’ life. Have a quiet talk with them,telling them the harm staying up late does to the body.Then,explain your situation to them sincerely,without sounding angry or fault-finding.I believe they'll understand you and will be willing to work out a solution with you.

If it still doesn't work,you may as well turn to your head teacher.I'm sure everything will turn out OK as long as you deal with the matter with calmness and patience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。首先要读懂来信，再根据来信中的问题给出建议。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，涵盖了所有要点。文章流畅通顺，且使用了一些复杂句式，如It is clear that the problem lies with your roommates, who go against the school rule and influence others’ life.包含了一个定语从句。Have a quiet talk with them,telling them the harm staying up late does to the body.这个句子使用了非谓语动词做状语，这些都为文章增色不少。