Question

Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.
It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.
I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.

Answer 1

小题1:It’s后加a
小题2:all改为both或去掉all
小题3:but 改为and
小题4:easy-going后加and或get改为getting
小题5:which 改为that
小题6:help 改为helps
小题7:in改为to
小题8:mine改为my
小题9:happy改为happily
小题10:dream改为dreams

试题分析：
小题1:这里抽象名词表示具体的引起人们某种情绪、情感的事，前面用不定冠词，所以It’s后加a。
小题2:all表示三者或三者以上；both表示两者。
小题3:这里表示并列关系，所以but 改为and。
小题4:句意：我很随和并且和我的同学相处得很好。所以easy-going后加and或get改为getting。
小题5:这里含有强调句结构，所以which 改为that。
小题6:根据helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships,可知help 改为helps。
小题7:be admitted to是固定用法，意思是被录取。
小题8:我的同学，所以mine改为my。
小题9:用副词修饰动词，所以happy改为happily。
小题10:我有许多梦想，所以dream改为dreams。