Question

假如你是李华，你和你的家人去朋友Cathy所在的城市伦敦旅游，回来后你想对她表达自已的感谢之情。请根据以下要点给Cathy写一封信：
1.感谢Cathy的热情款待
2.在伦敦玩的非常开心
3.伦敦的风景和美食令人印象深刻
4.邀请Cathy来中国旅游
要求：1.短文结构完整， 意思连贯，语言流畅，语法正确，符合逻辑
2.字数：100-- 120词左右

Answer 1

Dear Cathy,
Hello! Thank you for your help and good treat while we were traveling in London. You were so kind and friendly to treat us with good meals, and show us around the city. It is really nice to visit London, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a good impression. I had a great time there and learned a lot about London. Cathy, are you free these days? I would like to invite you to visit China. I'll show you around the interesting places, such as Beijing and Xi'an.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：这是一封感谢信，要点都给出来了，审题时注意，要包含：1.感谢Cathy的热情款待
2.在伦敦玩的非常开心3.伦敦的风景和美食令人印象深刻4.邀请Cathy来中国旅游，要把要点写全，不能遗漏，但不能逐字逐句的翻译，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。如范文的句子：It is really nice to visit London, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a good impression.既用了it做形式主语又用了whose引导的定语从句。
点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，本文运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。