Question

书面表达

请你根据以下个人资料写一篇100字左右的短文，介绍我国著名田径运动员刘翔，并简述他的事迹给你的启示。

注意：

1．内容包括全部信息。

2．结构完整。

3．使用连接语句使文章连贯。

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　One possible version：

　　Liu Xiang is a well-known athlete in track and field in China．

　　At an early age, he expressed a keen interest in sports and received a professional training in his spare time．While training, he was strict with himself and made amazing progress．In Athens 2004 Olympic Games, he won the gold medal and became the first Chinese man to win an Olympic track and field title．In 2006, he set a new world record．

　　Unfortunately, he got injured and had to leave the field and stay in hospital for medical care．But he didn't give up and trained even harder when he got out of hospital．In 2009, he won the silver medal at the World Athletics Championships．

　　What impresses me most is his determination, which helps him overcome the pressure and pain, so that he can stand again．In this way, he sets a good example for us to follow．

　　1．第一档：(15～13分)(很好)

　　完全完成试题规定的任务。运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇，语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了较强的语言运用能力。全文结构紧凑，逻辑清楚、合理。

　　2．第二档：(12～11分)(好)

　　完成试题规定的任务，运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求，语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致。使用了简单的语句间连接成分，内容连贯，逻辑清楚、合理。

　　3．第三档：(10～9分)(及格)

　　基本完成试题规定的任务。运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求，语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。内容基本连贯，逻辑清楚、合理。

　　4．第四档：(8～4分)(较差)

　　未恰当完成试题规定的任务。所用句式和词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

　　5．第五档：(3～1分)(差)

　　未完成试题规定的任务。句式单调，词汇贫乏，语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。信息未能传达给读者。

　　6．0分

　　未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关。

　　7．书写或标点符号不规范在4处以上(含4处)，或字迹潦草，在得分中再扣除1分(第四、五档文不扣此项分数)。重复错误只扣一次分数。