书面表达5月 1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动.假如你是校英语报的记者李华,请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道.注意:1.时间.地点.人物活动,2.老人们的反映,3.简短评论,4.报道的标题和记者姓名已给出.. Student Volunteers 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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书面表达（满分25分）
5月 1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院
(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校
英语报的记者李华,请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道.
注意:
1.时间、地点、人物活动；
2.老人们的反映；
3.简短评论；
4.报道的标题和记者姓名已给出.(不计词数)。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
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By Li Hua, School Newspaper

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day,Li Yue and Zhuang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。考生要多使用复杂句，如范文里面的句子, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.这句话用了非谓语动词。Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.这句话用的是独立主格结构。
点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。

练习册系列答案

假如你是邢台市第一中学学生李华，你的美国笔友约翰来信询问雅安地震情况，并表达了要去灾区当志愿者的愿望。请你回信，内容主要包括：
伤亡情况：死约200人，伤逾万人。
救援人员：军队，当地政府及民众。
婉言劝止并说明理由。
注意：      1. 词数100左右。
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
相关词汇：rescue 救援   the trapped 被困人员
Dear John,
Thank you very much for your concern over the earthquake in Ya’an, Sichuan Province.

Anyway, thank you for your offer and I will keep you informed of the situation.

Yours
Li Hua

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
To give the things you don’t need
When I moved into my new house, there was already a washing machine in it. However, I had just bought a new one, so I wondered what to do with the machine that was already in my house. I remembered two girls who regularly knocked at my door for religious reasons.
They never had or kept anything they didn’t need. If one of them needed something, they would work for the amount of time it took to make the money and then return to their religious work. They had just moved into their own house so I decided to give them all the things I didn’t need in my house. Whatever they didn’t need, they could give to the charity store they helped support.
I asked them if they needed a washing machine and they looked at each other and smiled. It turned out that they had called on a complete stranger the week before, a shingle mother with a new –born baby to take care of. She had been washing clothes by hand. When hey got home they discussed the fact that the woman probably needed their washing machine more than they did so they gave it to her. And their good deed had come back to them as they would be able to have my washing machine.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括上文的内容要点；
2．然后以约120个词就“To give the things you don’t need”的主题发表你的看法,内容包括：
说说文中提到的赠予方式的利与弊。
你赞同作者的这种赠予方式吗？请说明理由。
如果将来你也有机会参与这样的赠予活动，你愿意捐赠些什么、赠予给谁呢？
【写作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

假设你校英语社团举办以“构建多彩校园生活”为主题的征文活动，请你以“How to Make Our School Life Colorful”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括：
1.单调、枯燥的学习生活；
2.建议学校举办各种活动丰富学校生活。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

Guided writing（25分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
人们常说“战胜自己，超越自我”。请你以“I only compete with myself”为题写一篇短文。叙述你生活或学习中的一件事，说明只有战胜了自己，超越了自己才有意义，才是真正意义上的成功。

书面表达（满分15分）
假设你应邀参见学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己学习英语的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

自己英语学习的情况	1. 英语学习的目的
	2. 英语学习的方法
	3. 课外自学的途径
	……
对学校英语教学的建议	（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议。）

注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of l earning English with you.





Thank you for listening.

书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你校与美国一所友好学校决定通过网络开展跨文化交流活动（Cross -cultural Communication Project）。请你用邮件与美方联系，谈谈自己对交流活动内容的设想，征求对方意见。
你建议交流活动应包括以下四个方面内容：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 饮食文化差异；
3. 中学教育；
4. 语言学习体会。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Mark,
Hope all is well.



Yours,
Li Hua

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