Question

假设你是一名班长，学期结束时老师要你给同学们用英语作简短的评价，班里的林华同学这个学期以来变化很大。根据下表用英语写一篇短文。

过去	学习不努力，经常与同学吵架； 乱扔垃圾，经常打电脑游戏到深夜。
现在	自从老师找他谈话以后有了较大改变。 与同学相处融洽，爱护校园和班级环境。 参加各类活动。
希望	……

注意：1. 短文须包括所给的内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
　　　2. 词数90个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
We are glade that Lin Hua has improved a lot this term
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Answer 1

We are glad Lin Hua has improved a lot this term. As we all know, he didn’t study hard and always quarreled with his classmates in the past. He used to throw about rubbish. He often played computer games till very late at night. However, he has changed a lot since our teacher talked to him. Now he gets along well with his classmates and takes good care of the environment in our school and our classroom. He enjoys taking part in all kinds of activities. We all hope that he will behave better in the future.

试题分析：考察提纲类短文。本文话题是林华现在与过去的变化，要特别注意时态，现在的情况使用一般现在时，过去的情况使用一般过去时。要点基本上都以及给出，考生应该用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达，要尝试用复合句，如定语从句、同位语从句等，但句式不要单一，要形式多样，要使用恰当的连词，使句与句之间，段与段之间过渡自然。在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀：“先读提示，要点与格式要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视”。考生在明确目的和掌握要领后，要严格按照规定的时间去完成作文。
【亮点说明】：本文中使用了一些高级句式：As we all know这是一个非限制性定语从句。He often played computer games till very late at night.中状语从句的运用也很到位。高级的短语也较多，如quarrel with；used to；get along well with等等。连词的使用不求多，但求实用。