题目内容

假如你是李华，你校外教Johnny准备周末去附近的云雾山探险旅游，写信向你询问注意事项。请你根据下列提示，给他回一封电子邮件。

1. 准备一张云雾山的地图；

2. 查询当地实时天气，带上必要的衣物、食品、药品及手电筒；

3. 必要的话，找一位向导。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Johnny,

I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

... Yours,

Li Hua

 

One possible version:

Dear Johnny,

I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.

First of all, you should prepare a local map of Yunwu Mountain. Before starting, you should surf the Internet to look for some information about the weather on the weekend there so as to take enough clothes and food. Meanwhile, it’s necessary to take a flashlight and some medicines. Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together. If a local guide will serve you, it will be even better.

Special care should be taken while you travel in the mountain. I wish you a good time!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件应用文，回复周末外出注意事项。内容提示较详细，考生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前要认真审题，给外教回邮件注意语气要委婉。根据提示写作主要有三段内容，第一段开门见山表明写邮件的目的；第二段叙述外出需注意的事项；第三段结束，总结全文，表达自己的祝愿。另外，要注意文章的时态，用一般现在时和将来时。人称用第二人称单数。再有就是不能根据提示内容逐字逐句的翻译形成汉式的英语，应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文章符合邮件书信的写作要求，要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如I’m glad to know that…it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice. surf the Internet，so as to，it’s necessary to…; because，if，while 引导的状语从句；Before starting…省略形式。并注意了句子的衔接如：First of all, Meanwhile等。

考点：应用文——邮件

 

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