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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, lots of students plan to study abroad and study abroad has been popular in our country. More and more middle school students would like to go to abroad. Is it good to study abroad? In my opinion, on the one hand, it had some advantages. Studying abroad can provide better studying condition. People can make rapid progress on their foreign language study and it can also help widen their field of view. Beside, young students can learn advancing science and technology from foreign countries and spread cultures of different nations. On the other hand, it has disadvantages. For example, because of lack of living experience and poor capability to take care of themselves, they may feel alone and homesick. In addition, highly living expenses and tuition fees will become heavy burden upon their parents.


【小题1】study改为studying
【小题2】去掉abroad 前面to
【小题3】had改成has
【小题4】condition 改成conditions.
【小题5】on改成in
【小题6】Besid e改成Besides
【小题7】advancing改成 advanced
【小题8】alone 改成lonely
【小题9】highly改成 high
【小题10】be come后面加a

解析试题分析：这篇文章讲的是出国学习的优点和缺点。
【小题1】到国外上学在我们国家很受欢迎。动名词做主语：study改为studying
【小题2】越来越多的中学生想到国外上学。Abroad是副词，前面不加介词，去掉abroad 前面to
【小题3】到国外上学有很多优点。这是客观事实，用一般现在时：had改成has
【小题4】在国外学习可以提供更好的学习条件。Condition做为“条件”讲是可数名词， 改成conditions.
【小题5】人们可以在外语学习方面取得快速的进步。Make progress in在…方面取得进步。on改成in
【小题6】此外，他们可以学到更多先进的科学技术知识。Beside是“在…旁边”，改成Besides“此外”
【小题7】形容词：先进的： advanced
【小题8】远离家乡和祖国他们会感到孤单想家。Alone“一个人，单独”， 改成lonely“孤单的”
【小题9】高额的生活成本和学费成了父母沉重的负担。修饰名词living expenses用high
【小题10】泛指“一个沉重的负担”，become后面加a
考点：考查短文改错

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One quiet weekend some men broke into a shop next a bank. Then they made the hole in the wall and got into the bank. One of their friends were watching the bank from a flat on the another of the road. He had the duty of telling the men inside if there was any dangerous. The men talked to each other by the radio, but someone else hearing their conversation. The police was told, and they couldn’t find the right bank. Finally the robbers run away with a lot of money.

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:  1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
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注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【小题6】in English learning, especial in improving their oral skills.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
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