Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 \ 划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：

每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

I was surprising to receive your letter a few days ago. Since I came to the new school, I had planned to write to you. Therefore, the busy life of the school spared me no time. After came to the school, I made up of my mind to study hard. To tell you the truth, that was Miss White, my new English teacher, who changed my mind. She suggested that I give in my bad habits. Although he is very strict with us, all the students fond of her.

I have to stop here. I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

1.surprising—surprised

2.had--have

3.Therefore---However

4.came---coming

5.去掉of;

6.that—it

7.in—up

8.he---she

9.are ∧ fond

10.hear—hearing

【解析】

1. 考查形容词。 本句使用surprised感到惊讶的，是由过去分词转换的形容词，通常修饰人或者与人有关的事物。

2. 考查动词的时态。前面的连词是since，与现在完成时连用，故使用have

3. 考查连词辨析上下文之间存在着转折关系，故使用however。我原来计划写信给你，然而，忙碌的校园生活让我抽不出时间。

4. 考查非谓语动词。 介词after后面要接动名词doing的形式。

5. 考查固定搭配。make up one’s mind下定决心做某事。

6. 考查固定句型结构。make up one’s mind下定决心做某事。

7. 考查固定短语。ive up放弃，本句是指放弃原有的坏习惯；give in屈服，让步；这是一个不及物动词短语，后面要接to…；形成give in to…向….屈服。

8. 考查代词辨析  本句的主语是Miss White是一位女性，故使用she做主语

9.∧ fond 考查固定短语。be fond of喜欢…；本句在fond前面加are，构成系表结构。

10.考查固定短语。look forward to期待着…；这里的to是介词，后面要接动名词形式

考点：短文改错