Question

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
How an unbelievable scene! A modern young couple were eating fruit in public and had thrown a plenty of waste on the ground. When an old cleaner came to clean up, the man was very angry. He points at the cleaner, saying in a loud voice,” How impolite ! They haven’t finished eating ! ” “How could people behave such badly ?” I thought. Obvious, in their eyes, they could do all that they liked and ignore other’s feelings. In my opinion, we should pay attention our behavior, obey public rules and respect other people’s work. We should know that civilized people are those who has good manners but a beautiful mind all the time.

Answer 1

【小题1】How→What
【小题2】去掉a
【小题3】points→pointed
【小题4】They→We
【小题5】such→so
【小题6】Obvious→Obviously
【小题7】other’s→others’
【小题8】attention后面加to
【小题9】has→have
【小题10】but→and

解析试题分析：一对年轻夫妇在公共场合吃水果，扔了一地的垃圾。当一个年老的清洁工过来打扫的时候，这个人非常生气。他指责清洁工不懂礼貌。其实，遵守公共秩序和制度，尊重别人这才是有礼貌的表现。有礼貌的人应该是举止文明而且心灵美丽的。
【小题1】How→What 考查感叹句。How an unbelievable scene! How用来对形容词，副词和动词进行感叹，句型是：How +adj/ adv / v+主语+谓语；What是对名词进行感叹，句型为：What+（冠词）+形容词+名词+主语+谓语，此句中心词是名词，故把How改为What。
【小题2】去掉a 考查冠词。and had thrown a plenty of waste on the ground.固定短语：plenty of “大量的，许多的”，故去掉不定冠词a。
【小题3】points→pointed 考查动词时态。He points at the cleaner。故事是讲述过去发生的事情，应该用一般过去时，故把points改为pointed。
【小题4】They→We 考查人称代词。They haven’t finished eating ! ” 从语境判断说话人指自己还没有吃完，老人就来打扫卫生是不礼貌的行为，故把They改为We。
【小题5】such→so 考查不定代词。“How could people behave such badly ? such用来修饰名词，而badly是副词，应该用so来修饰。
【小题6】Obvious→Obviously 考查副词。Obvious, in their eyes……。此处是副词做状语，修饰整个句子，把Obvious改为Obviously。
【小题7】other’s→others’ 考查所有格。……and ignore other’s feelings.。Other后面必须有名词，此处指“别人，其他人”，应该用others，以s结尾的名词所有格应该是加’，故把other’s改为others’。
【小题8】attention后面加to 考查介词。we should pay attention  our behavior。固定短语：pay attention to “注意”，在attention后加介词to。
【小题9】has→have 考查主谓一致。……who has good manners but a beautiful mind all the time. 定语从句中的关系代词who用来指代those，当关系代词在定语从句中做主语时，从句的谓语动词应该和先行词保持一致，故把has改为have。
【小题10】but→and 考查连词。who has good manners but a beautiful mind all the time。Good manners和a beautiful mind是同类事物，没有转折关系，把but改为and。
考点：考查短文改错