Question

有些青少年为了显得更酷或更成熟而染上吸烟的坏习惯。针对这种现象，并为配合英语教学，你校决定举办一次英语征文活动，宣传吸烟的危害，倡导同学们远离香烟。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。
要点如下：1. 损害心肺，易致癌；
      2. 气味难闻；影响他人健康；
      3. 一旦上瘾，很难戒掉。
注意：1. 字数80词左右。
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many adolescents who smoke.They think they look cool or appear more grown-up while smoking.
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Answer 1

One possible version:
There are many adolescents who smoke. They think they look cool or appear more grown-up while smoking.
In fact, smoking is a bad habit. If you smoke, it has bad effects on your health. It does harm to your heart and lungs, which might eventually lead to cancer. Cigarette smoke also affects the health of non-smokers. Besides, your breath and even clothes smell terrible. Further more, once you become addicted to smoking, it is really hard to quit.
So, for the benefit of yourself and others, do not get into the bad habit of smoking.

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，内容要求学生宣传吸烟的危害，倡导同学们远离香烟。 议论文文体一般用一般现在时，注意增加细节，使前后句有恰当的衔接，还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。注意长短句搭配。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确，思路清晰。把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in fact，have bad effects on，do harm to，lead to, become addicted to, which引导的非限制性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：besides，further more , so等等。