Question

作文（满分25分）
请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，阐述水在人们生活中的重要性。
1.水是生命之源。没有水，人与动物将无法生存。
2.随着人口增长，工、农业的发展，水污染严重，缺水问题成了一个严重的问题。
3.应积极采取措施解决缺水问题，如：充分利用水资源，避免污染，净化雨水或海水等。
注意：1.词数：100左右。2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
提示：water shortage 缺水， pollute 污染，take measures采取措施，purify净化,                                                   
                                                                           
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

It is difficult to imagine what life would be like without water. Water is very important to all living things. There would be no life without water.
Water shortage has become a serious problem. One reason for that the growing population. The development of industry and agriculture need much more water. Another reason in that water is being wasted in some areas.
Therefore, we must take measures to solve this problem. First of all, we must make good use of water and avoid polluting it. In addition, we can get useful water through purifying water or sea water.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。