题目内容
13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat．Now I would like tell you something about it．Lie in the north of the city，this Residential Center is small with only six building．My flat，which covers the area of 36 square meters，is in the fourth floor in Building 2．It was made up of a sitting room，a bedroom，a kitchen and a toilet．When you enter into the flat，you will find yourself in the sitting room．The sitting room is the part that I like best，because it is brightly with a lovely balcony（阳台），which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below．Although my flat is small，I like them very much because it is comfortable．
Best regards，
Yours
Li Hua．
分析 本文主要介绍作者的公寓．它有三十六平米，由一间起居室、一间卧室、一间厨房和一间卫生间组成．虽然它小，但作者很喜欢它．
解答 Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat．Now I would like∧tell you something about it．Lie in the north of the city，this Residential Center is small with only six building．My flat，which covers the area of 36 square meters，is in the fourth floor in Building 2．It was made up of a sitting room，a bedroom，a kitchen and a toilet．When you enter into the flat，you will find yourself in the sitting room．The sitting room is the part that I like best，because it is brightly with a lovely balcony（阳台），which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below．Although my flat is small，I like them very much because it is comfortable．
Best regards，
Yours
Li Hua．
详解：
1．加to 考查动词不定式．would like to do sth．意为"想要做某事"，是固定搭配．
2．Lie改为Lying 考查现在分词．this Residential Center与lie之间是主谓关系，用现在分词作状语．
3．building改为buildings 考查名词复数．building是可数名词，其前有数词six修饰时用复数形式．
4．the改为an 考查冠词．an area of…意为"…的面积"，是固定词组，因area以发元音开头，用不定冠词an．
5．in改为on 考查介词．on the fourth floor意为"在第四层上"，介词用 on 不用 in．
6．was改为is 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．
7．去掉into 考查词语用法．enter 是及物动词，直接接宾语，去掉介词into．
8．brightly改为bright 考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
9．which改为where 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词balcony在从句中作地点状语，用关系副词where．
10．them改为it 考查代词．it指上文提到的my flat．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
