Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Great changes have been taken place in my village. Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste. As the result, the lake was serious polluted. To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust. Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil. Now the poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings. The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees. On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 去掉been

 lie改成lay

 the改成 a

 serious 改成seriously

 that 改成which

 Better 改成Worse

 deal后面加of

 house 改成houses

 ploughing 改成plough

 his 改成their

【解析】

试题分析：

 take place是不及物动词短语，不能够用被动式：去掉been

 时态错误，时间是Ten years ago 用过去时lie改成lay

 考查词组：as a result因此，the改成 a

 考查副词：seriously修饰polluted，serious 改成seriously

 这是非限制性定语从句，不能用that，that 改成which

 根据上下文，应该是更糟糕的是：Better 改成Worse

 考查词组：a great deal of+不可数名词：deal后面加of

 谓语是have，主语是复数house 改成houses

 这里的used to do是过去常常：ploughing 改成plough

 修饰villagers用their，his 改成their

考点：考查短文改错

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。