Question

假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑假课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1. 本人简介；2. 求助内容； 3. 约定时间；
4. 你的联系方式(Email: lihua@1236.com; Phone:12345678)
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulty with note-taking, and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com; 12345678
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：本篇书面表达是要求写一封信进行预约。对书信这种写作题材同学们非常熟悉，而且写作内容贴近学生生活，所以不会感觉无话可说。不过在写作时要注意对本人简介、求助内容、约定时间和联系方式等要点进行陈述时，要发挥想象力，适当增加细节；而且还要选择恰当的连接词以使文章内容连贯，上下衔接自然。在时态方面，可以使用一般现在时态。此外本文是向辅导中心寻求帮助，所以要注意语言简洁明了，语气委婉客气。
【亮点说明】文章要点全面，结构紧凑，语言简洁明了。作者用简单流畅的语言表述了自己写信的目的，而且对要点的陈述简洁明了，条理清晰。文中出现的高级词汇have difficulty with 和I have no idea of …，以及同位语a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.并列句But I have some difficulty with note-taking, and I have no idea of how to use the library.和宾语从句Please let me know which day is OK with you.的使用都显示了作者对语言很强的运用能力，成为了文章的亮点。