Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。停课期间，妈妈过生日，你在学习之余给妈妈准备了丰盛的生日晚餐。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇稿件，记述整个过程。

注意：词数不少于 60。

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Answer 1

【答案】During the winter vacation, my father and I celebrated my mother’s birthday, which made me feel great.

At eight that morning, I was about to study when suddenly my father came into my room and whispered to me that day was my mother’s birthday. Wow! It was time for me to celebrate it for her. I decided to bake a birthday cake and prepare a rich family dinner in person. After finishing all my work, I learned how to bake a cake on line without delay. It took me a long time to make it. And then, I was immediately busy preparing all dishes.

The moment my mother stepped into, the celebration began. My father expressed his best wishes with a bunch of roses. My mother was moved with tears rolling in her eyes, seeing all we had done. Chatting merrily, we were immersed in the warm atmosphere.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于图画作文。

第一步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。停课期间，妈妈过生日，你在学习之余给妈妈准备了丰盛的生日晚餐。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇稿件，记述整个过程。

第二步：根据图片确定文章内容和关键词语，第一幅图要表达爸爸告诉作者今天是妈妈的生日；第二幅图表达作者从网上搜寻如何制作蛋糕；第三幅图表达作者为妈妈制作生日蛋糕，准备丰盛的晚餐；第四幅图表达作者和爸爸为妈妈庆祝生日。关键词语有：celebrate my mother’s birthday, bake a birthday cake, prepare a rich family dinner, on line, express best wishes，Chatting merrily, warm atmosphere.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般过去时。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。