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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（　　），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（　　）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分．
On the hot afternoon of last Saturday，Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to another，look for the clothes we would wear in the singing contests．While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms，she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting．Finally she found the suitable clothes．Deeply moving by what she did，we tried our best but won the first prize in the contest．Li Yue is always cares about the class．She often devotes her spare time in helping others．She has set good example to us．Therefore，she deserves the honor and we should learn from him．

Answer 1

分析 上个周六的下午，天很热，Li Yue 去了市区买歌唱比赛的服装，我们却在凉爽舒适的房间里享受休闲时光，她花费了一下午的时间终于找到了合适的服装．被Li Yue的行为所感动，我们演唱比赛取得第一名的好成绩．Li Yue一直很关心班级，她经常在业余时间帮助他人，她为我们树立了一个好的榜样，我们应该向她学习．

解答 On the hot afternoon of last Saturday，Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to
                                                                                                 walked
another，look for the clothes we would wear in the singing contests．While the rest of us
            looking                                                                contest
were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms，she spent the whole afternoon 
                                                             comfortable
searching and selecting．Finally she found the suitable clothes．Deeply moving by what she
                                                                                                         moved
did，we tried our bestbutwon the first prize in the contest．Li Yue is always cares about the
                                and                                                         去掉is
class．She often devotes her spare time in helping others．She has set∧good example to us．
                                                          to                                         a
Therefore，she deserves the honor and we should learn from him．
                                                                                        her
1．walk改为walked；考查动词的时态，事情发生在last Saturday，所以要用一般过去时．
2．look改为looking；考查分词作状语，句子的主语与动词look是主谓关系，所以要用现在分词作状语．
3．contests改为contest；考查名词，结合语境分析，这里应该是指一场比赛，所以要用单数形式．
4．comfortably改为comfortable；考查形容词，这里用形容词作定语，修饰名词rooms．
5．moving改为moved；考查分词作状语，句子主语we与动词move是被动关系，所以要用过去分词作状语．
6．but改为and；考查连词，分析句意应为"我们努力取得了第一名的好成绩"，所以这里不表转折，应该是并列关系，故用and．
7．去掉is；考查句式结构，这是一个一般现在时的句子谓语部分为cares about，is在这里多余，所以去掉．
8．in改为to；考查介词，devote time to（doing）sth是固定搭配，这里to是介词，意为"致力于做某事"．
9．good前面加a；考查冠词，example作为"榜样，例子"讲是可数名词，所以前面加a 泛指"一个"，set a good example to sb 意为"为某人树立一个好的榜样"．

点评 整体理解短文，充分运用所学的基础知识，包括一些实词和虚词的用法，固定短语搭配，习惯性用法，结合上下文整体关系，找出错误并加以修正．