Question

学校英语论坛针对目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重的问题进行了“治堵方案大家谈”的讨论。以下是讨论概要。

【写作内容】请根据以上概要写一篇短文，包括以下内容：
1、存在的问题；     2、解决的方案；      3、方案的好处。
【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Answer 1

Version 1
Nowadays, the problem of traffic jams in cities is as serious as that of air pollution. Some suggested solutions to these problems include a reduction in the use of private cars and an increase in the practice of car-pooling, where one car is shared by several workmates or friends. In addition, the government could improve the public transport system in order to make it more convenient for people. The government should also encourage cycling by building more green lanes. This will help save money, time and energy as well as improve the environment.
Version 2
The problems of traffic jams and air pollution have aroused increasing attention recently. Some of the possible solutions to these problems are as follows. First, car owners could share their cars with their friends and workmates, thus reducing the use of private cars. Second, the government could make it more convenient for its citizens to use public transport by improving the public transport system and encourage cycling by building more green lanes. By taking the above measures, we could surely save money, time and energy as well as improve the environment.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。