Question

随着时代的发展，人们的阅读方式也在逐渐改变，越来越多的人喜欢使用手机或互联网来进行日常阅读。请根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文发到你的博客上。

电子阅读方式的优点	电子阅读方式的缺点
1.方便快捷 2.信息量大 3.节省纸张	1.不利于培养良好的阅读习惯 2.不利于身体健康 3.影响视力
你的看法……

电子阅读: E?reading

注意：词数不少于120个。

 

Answer 1

Nowadays more people choose to read on their mobile phones or computers.E?reading has become a popular way of reading，especially among young people.

E?reading is much more convenient than traditional reading.You can read at any time or place if you like.Also，you can scan a lot of information on the Internet.More importantly，it can save paper，thus protecting our forest resources.

Despite the advantages of e?reading，there are also some disadvantages.Firstly，e?reading does not help to develop good reading habits.Because there is so much information，it is hard to do deep reading.Secondly，the radiation of electronic devices will do harm to our health.Thirdly，if you stare at screens for a long time，your eyesight will be damaged.

In my view，everything has its advantages and disadvantages.Whether these advantages outweigh the disadvantages depends on what you want to achieve.

【解析】

试题分析：这是提纲类写作，考生要先审清题目要求，本文的话题是电子阅读的优缺点，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，内容有：1. 电子阅读方式的优点; 2. 电子阅读方式的缺点3. 你的看法…，要点还是比较详细的，但考生要适当增加细节，特别是阐述自己的观点的时候，要结合自己的生活进行阐述。明确作文的基本内容后，就是选用准确的词汇和恰当的句子来表达。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如： Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。

【亮点说明】范文要点明确，语言精炼，好的短语居多：at any time在任何时候，do harm to对…造成伤害， In my view在我看来，句式上长短句结合，运用比较好的句子有：Also，you can scan a lot of information on the Internet.More importantly，it can save paper，thus protecting our forest resources.这句话用了现在分词做结果状语， it is hard to do deep reading.这句话用了it做形式主语， Whether these advantages outweigh the disadvantages depends on what you want to achieve.这句话用了主语从句和宾语从句。还有范文还使用了Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly，这样的词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查提纲类书面表达