Question

请根据下列提示，用英语为某品牌一款智能手机写一篇促销说明
必要性：手机是人们联系工具之一
颜色：黑色和白色 功能：收发短信，照相，上网，下载音乐，浏览网页……
其他：MP4, 自选游戏……参考词汇：浏览 browse
注意：1.词数100左右   2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Answer 1

 
Thanks for choosing our smart phones. As we know, mobile phones have become the most important way of communication, with which we can get in touch with each other wherever and whenever we are.
This product for us has many different functions to meet different needs, such as sending or receiving short messages. Besides, you won’t take pains to carry your camera any more, for the mobile phone itself has one. Thus, you can take pictures whenever you like. What’s more, with the function of surfing the Internet, it allows you to browse wet pages and download what you want. It can even bring you a flood of music and movies. Most importantly, it can be used as an MP4 as well as a computer game player.
As for colors, we offer you the choice between white and black.

试题分析：本文是一篇说明文。文章的要点都已经给了出来，考生发挥的余地较小，只需要翻译成英语即可，写作的时候要把所有的要点都包括在内，不要遗漏。同时注意使用被动语态，倒装句等不同的句式，让文章充满变化，不要那么的死板。同时要使用高级的词汇和词组提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如thank for，get in touch with，such as，allow sb. to do，be used as，between … and …；which引导的非限定性定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如so，Besides，Thus，whenever，What’s more等等。